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Aar Bear's girl
Apr 4th, 2006, 10:32 PM
Hi guys. I'm writing a fic about Aaron and i want to know what you think of it. its not very good so I'll just post a little of it
Amanda was a pretty girl. She had brown eyes that when looking into them you could see her soul, Brown hair with a little bit of blond, and her eyelashes were the blackest shade. She never wore mascara or eyeliner mainly because she didn’t need them and also because she was afraid to stick potentially sharp or pointy things near her eyes. She and her family moved to Florida when she was fifteen and immediately became friends with the girl across the street. Her name was Angel. Angel had two brothers and two sisters. She was also a twin. Her twin’s name was Aaron and her sister’s name was Leslie (Amanda had only met her once. She had met Aaron a couple times but that was it.) Her other brother and sister’s names were Nick and B.J. (Amanda had never met them.)
Amanda had moved during November of last year. It was now time for school again. She didn’t go to school last year, because she had missed too much. so she was home schooled until now. She was excited to meet new friends besides Angel. She was in the tenth grade and was turning sixteen in November. Angel was seventeen and would be turning eighteen in December. They had mixed classes and she was a senior.
FIRST DAY OF SCHOOL
Angel woke up and was getting ready for school when she heard Aaron call her name from downstairs.
“Angel hurry up!”
“Hold on!” she yelled back as she grabbed her books and ran down the stairs.
Aaron was standing there arms crossed and tapping his foot impatiently. “Are you ready now?” he asked sarcastically.
“No.” she replied equally sarcastic. She then added, “We have to pick up Amanda.”
Aaron rolled his eyes and walked out the door. Angel followed. As Aaron got in his car, Angel ran across the street to Amanda’s and knocked on the door. When Amanda came out they got in to Aaron’s car.
Aaron glanced at Amanda in the rearview mirror. He cocked an eyebrow. She was wearing a sparkly pink tank top and low cut jeans. She looked good. She was busy talking to Angel.
“So what is this place like?” Amanda asked.
“Well the teachers are pretty nice and most of the students mind their own business.” Angel replied.
They chatted on for a while and Aaron occasionally joined in.
They finally arrived at school and they went inside.
Angel said she had to go to the bathroom and asked Aaron to show Amanda around.
“Yo Aaron what’s up?” someone asked as he and another guy came up to them.
“And who’s your girlfriend?” the other one asked clearly checking her out by tilting his head to the side and running his eyes up and down her body.
Just as Aaron was about to reply, Amanda said,
“I’m not his…” her eyes landed on a very cute guy walking don the hall with a group of other guys. Aaron and his two friends looked at her. “…girlfriend.” the three guys had their eyebrows raised not because she said that she wasn’t his, but because she wasn’t even looking at them.
Amanda finally felt their eyes on her and turned her head to look at Aaron. “Who’s that?” she asked then looked back at the cute guy. Aaron and his friends followed her gaze. It landed on the football captain.
“That’s Jesse. He’s captain of the football team.” Aaron said. There was something in his voice that said he didn’t like Jesse but Amanda didn’t notice.
“Oh.” Amanda just kept staring at Jesse.
10 seconds later Angel returned and noticed where Amanda’s attention had gone. She looked at her brother to see his reaction but his face was emotionless. Usually you could tell what he was feeling by looking into his eyes but today they didn’t reveal any of his feelings. He was just standing there talking to the guys.
*nervous* so what did you think? It doesn't have a name. It just says "Aaron" in my documents folder.
alexlovesaaron5
Apr 4th, 2006, 11:05 PM
I like it...very nice! :) just curious what part of oregon ya from?
XDaysofmylifeX
Apr 4th, 2006, 11:15 PM
hey hun..
haven't talked to you in awhile..lol..i see your not using the aaron bear avy anymore.
alexlovesaaron5
Apr 4th, 2006, 11:34 PM
hey hun..
haven't talked to you in awhile..lol..i see your not using the aaron bear avy anymore.
hey hunni.....
i missssssed you....yay...I dunno why I was really upset that day...do you still have it???? I loved my aar bear icon... :D Your icon is very adorable...I GOT A JOB!!!!!!!!!! omg yes I'm so happy..luv ya
Aar Bear's girl
Apr 4th, 2006, 11:37 PM
I'm from Beaverton
alexlovesaaron5
Apr 4th, 2006, 11:39 PM
I'm from Beaverton
cool I've lived in oregon for tooo long..I have a few friends from beaverton...that's cool..I hate OREGON! I'm moving soon...to TEXAS!
Aar Bear's girl
Apr 4th, 2006, 11:42 PM
Texas cool. I've wanted to go there for a while. I could post more of the story if you really like it.
alexlovesaaron5
Apr 4th, 2006, 11:45 PM
Texas cool. I've wanted to go there for a while. I could post more of the story if you really like it.
that'll be great...gotta go to work early in the mornin' catch ya tomorrow some time.. :) Nice to meet you I'm Laurie!! :D
Aar Bear's girl
Apr 4th, 2006, 11:46 PM
I'm Mandy. nice to meet you too.
BabyG
Apr 5th, 2006, 03:06 PM
cool I've lived in oregon for tooo long..I have a few friends from beaverton...that's cool..I hate OREGON! I'm moving soon...to TEXAS!
Your moving to Texas?! Where at in Texas, I'm gonna be in Texas this summer.:D
BabyG
Apr 5th, 2006, 03:07 PM
Texas cool. I've wanted to go there for a while. I could post more of the story if you really like it.
Yes please
alexlovesaaron5
Apr 5th, 2006, 03:07 PM
Your moving to Texas?! Where at in Texas, I'm gonna be in Texas this summer.:D
San Angelo...around there...
Aar Bear's girl
Apr 5th, 2006, 03:28 PM
Ok Here's the next part. I'm gland you like it!
Angel and Amanda were sitting down at lunch outside talking to each other.
“So seriously, what is the deal with this Jesse guy?” Amanda asked her.
“Why?” Angel raised an eyebrow. “Are you crushing on him?”
Amanda smiled and got this look in her eyes as if she were daydreaming. “Oh he is so totally crush worthy.” she sighed.
Angel snorted. “Well you won’t have much luck getting him.” Amanda broke out of her trance and gave a little frown.
“Why not?”
“Well for one thing he is the football captain and you are … you.” Angel saw the look Amanda gave her and hurriedly continued. “I mean not that that is wrong or anything but hello, Captain of the football team wont go out with just any girl. She has to be head cheerleader or at least know everything there is to know about the sport.”
“Well I can’t make cheerleader because I just don’t want to and I know absolutely nothing about football. Where am I going to learn everything there is to know about football?”
“Don’t look at me, Amanda, I don’t know anything about it either.” Angel said
“Well where am I going to find someone who does and is willing to teach me?”
“Ooh I know someone who does but I don’t think he’s willing to teach you just so you can run off to his arch nemesis Jesse McCartney.”
“Who? I’ll take anyone! Tell me!” she said excited at the thought of Jesse liking her.
Angel on the other hand, got this worried look on her face. “Well -”
“Come on tell me tell me!” Amanda was almost literally bouncing in her seat.
“Aaron.”
“What?” Amanda stopped bouncing and raised an eyebrow.
“Hi Aaron!” Angel said hoping Amanda would get the hint. Amanda turned around in her seat and saw Aaron less than five feet away walking towards them.
“Hey” he replied and sat down next to Amanda.
“Hi” she said then looked back to Angel, completely oblivious to the look Angel was giving her.
“So as you were saying, who is going to teach me about football?”
Before Angel got a chance to say anything, Aaron said “What do you want to know about it?”
“Everything there is to know!” She replied, turning to Aaron to give him her full attention. She was excited again that Aaron could possibly teach her about football.
“Oh. You like football?” he raised his eyebrows. “I used to play.”
“Really?” she got excited again. “So you could, like, teach me?”
“Sure, why not.” he shrugged and was suddenly trapped in the arms of a squealing Amanda.
“Thank you thank you thank you” she said as she hugged him. Aaron, who had been caught off guard from the sudden hug, regained his focus and hugged her back (awkward as he may feel). “No problem.” he said. He was used to receiving hugs and such from his fans, but Amanda didn’t seem like she even knew that he was famous. …Either that or she was a very clever fan. He went with the first option.
“So when do we start?” She ask him when she released him, effectively startling him out of his thoughts.
“Huh? Oh, yeah. Um… come by after school and we’ll get started.”
“Great. See you then.” she said as the bell rang and she headed off to class.
“Aaron. Wait.” Angel said as she caught up to him.
“What?” Aaron turned around.
“Aren’t you even curious why she wants to learn about it?” Angel didn’t want to hurt Amanda, but she didn’t want problems to start between Aaron and Jesse again.
“I didn’t really think about it. Why? What’s up? It’s not like she’s some crazed fan right?” Aaron said hoping that Angel would shed some light on his earlier thoughts.
“No, she doesn’t even know you’re famous -”
“Well then what’s the problem? … I mean besides her getting all mad if she finds out and you didn’t tell her?” Aaron cut her off. The bell rang again. “I gotta go. I’m late.” He said as he raced down the hall.
tell me what you think ! :)
alexlovesaaron5
Apr 5th, 2006, 03:31 PM
sounds good...keep going...me like!!
Aar Bear's girl
Apr 5th, 2006, 03:42 PM
Before I continue posting some more, do any of you write Aaron Carter fiction?
BabyG
Apr 5th, 2006, 03:46 PM
San Angelo...around there...
oh Darn...where's that at? Like what area of Texas?
alexlovesaaron5
Apr 5th, 2006, 03:49 PM
Before I continue posting some more, do any of you write Aaron Carter fiction?
Yeah I do...I'm actually writing a novel too....I have one that I never finished...I can post my site if you like...
BabyG
Apr 5th, 2006, 03:49 PM
This is getting goooood!!!!
I write fan fiction!!!! Me me over here!!! I'm the one!!!
alexlovesaaron5
Apr 5th, 2006, 03:51 PM
oh Darn...where's that at? Like what area of Texas?
um, good question? I believe its past the bigger cities like Dallas and such...I love it there...hopefully when I get married (not any time soon) I'd love to live there with my hubby.. :)
alexlovesaaron5
Apr 5th, 2006, 03:52 PM
http://www.geocities.com/fanfiction110/enter2.html
BabyG
Apr 5th, 2006, 03:53 PM
um, good question? I believe its past the bigger cities like Dallas and such...I love it there...hopefully when I get married (not any time soon) I'd love to live there with my hubby.. :)
haha...where i'm going is like two hours from Dallas.
alexlovesaaron5
Apr 5th, 2006, 03:56 PM
haha...where i'm going is like two hours from Dallas.
send me a cowboy please? :roll: here's my address:
1234 Heaven sent
Waiting for love, AC
Aaron Carter
ISHOTT
LOL....I'm bored sorry :crazy:
Aar Bear's girl
Apr 5th, 2006, 04:13 PM
send me a cowboy please? :roll: here's my address:
1234 Heaven sent
Waiting for love, AC
Aaron Carter
ISHOTT
LOL....I'm bored sorry :crazy:
Lol that's funny.:roll:
yeah I love aaron fiction. I used to write Buffy the vampire Slayer.
xfunksterjunkyx
Apr 5th, 2006, 04:55 PM
Before I continue posting some more, do any of you write Aaron Carter fiction?
Uh me. More now. Fine. Please.
BabyG
Apr 5th, 2006, 05:23 PM
send me a cowboy please? :roll: here's my address:
1234 Heaven sent
Waiting for love, AC
Aaron Carter
ISHOTT
LOL....I'm bored sorry :crazy:
:tongue: Lol, you just made my day :cool:
alexlovesaaron5
Apr 5th, 2006, 05:47 PM
:tongue: Lol, you just made my day :cool:
aww, I'm glad...now get packaging!!! :]
Aar Bear's girl
Apr 5th, 2006, 06:09 PM
Uh me. More now. Fine. Please.
Ok lol But after this chapter I have to write more:) where can I find your Aaron fictions? :)
After school, Amanda went over to Angel’s and knocked on the door. Ginger answered with the baby she had had over the summer.
“Hi Ginger, is Aaron home yet? He’s supposed to teach me about football.”
He’s in his room honey.” Ginger said as she let Amanda in. “Oh, can you do me a huge favor and watch the baby? I have to run to the store and he’s been kind of fussy.”
“Sure, no problem.” Amanda said as Ginger handed the baby to her.
“Thanks sweetie. I shouldn’t be more than a couple hours.”
“Take your time. Go out for dinner with your husband or something.”
“That sounds like a good idea. Thanks.” Ginger said as she walked out the door.
As Amanda went upstairs, she heard music coming from Aaron’s room. As she got closer, she noticed that his door was halfway open. When she reached his room she saw that he was singing.
“I lie awake, thinking of you,
Wondering why I do the things I do.
How can I let your love escape,
When all I can do is wait.
I can’t stop, your love is still there.
The ghost of you haunts my mind everywhere
I’ll find a way, to make it right
And someday soon, I’ll get you back in my life.
Faces change, and time goes by,
A new day comes, but I won’t change my mind
How can I stop what I’m dreaming of?
I’ll wait, I’ll wait forever for your love.
Forever for your love
Lonely days and sleepless nights
Remembering what your touch felt like
You’ll be in my heart for always
Although you’re not here nothing’s always the same
I can’t stop, your love’s still there
The ghost of you haunts my mind everywhere
I’ll find a way to make it right
And someday soon, I’ll get you back every night
Faces change, and time goes by,
A new day comes and I won’t change my mind
How can I stop what I’m dreaming of?
I’ll wait I’ll wait forever for your love
Forever for your love.”
“that was very pretty.”
Aaron looked up. “what are you doing here?” he asked startled.
I have to write more now
alexlovesaaron5
Apr 5th, 2006, 06:17 PM
yay, i really really really like it...
xfunksterjunkyx
Apr 5th, 2006, 09:01 PM
Ok lol But after this chapter I have to write more:) where can I find your Aaron fictions? :)
Heyy, I'm loving it soo far. Mine is on each of the link letters in my siggy. The "Geckoes are Hot" one. :D
BabyG
Apr 6th, 2006, 03:29 PM
mines in my siggy.
SapphireTears
Apr 6th, 2006, 03:45 PM
I want more! I want more!
Aar Bear's girl
Apr 6th, 2006, 04:30 PM
Okay I'm back with more Aaron but question first: what do you think is happening in your opinion?
CamoBratDragon
Apr 6th, 2006, 05:02 PM
Lol that's funny.:roll:
yeah I love aaron fiction. I used to write Buffy the vampire Slayer.
heh, i'm writing an Aaron/BSB fiction thats a slight(okay, semi-major, depends how you look at it) rip off of Buffy kinda stuff, but kinda Charmed-ish too. i don't have it posted on my site yet(it needs a beginning, don't ask lol), but i have 2 other in progress ones up.
http://camostar.tripod.com
Aar Bear's girl
Apr 6th, 2006, 05:09 PM
you should post it. I would love to read it!
BabyG
Apr 6th, 2006, 05:52 PM
more hunnie!!!!!!!!!
I think Aaron's gonna fall for her....:)
SapphireTears
Apr 6th, 2006, 07:44 PM
I think that Aaron is gonna' teach her about football, then see her flirting with Jesse and get a jealous :D
Aar Bear's girl
Apr 6th, 2006, 09:04 PM
Let's see what happens shall we? :)) lol
“that was very pretty.”
Aaron looked up. “what are you doing here?” he asked startled.
“You’re supposed to teach me about football, remember?” she said with her eyebrow cocked and balanced the baby on her hip.
“Oh yeah, that’s right.” he looked from her to his baby brother that was making little noises. He got up off his bed and walked over to the door where Amanda and Kanden (is that his name?) stood. “Come here little guy.” Aaron held out his arms for Kanden and Amanda handed him over. “So where did Ginger go?” Aaron moved away from the door so Amanda could come in. He sat on his bed and motioned for Amanda to do the same. As she sat down, Aaron swung his legs up and leaned against the headboard while stroking Kanden’s barely there hair at the back of his head.
“She went to the store so she’ll come back to drop things off then she’s going to dinner with Bob so she asked me to baby-sit.” she said while she watched Aaron and Kanden (who was beginning to fall asleep).
“Good that gives us plenty of time. There’s a football game on at five. I can teach you while you watch it.”
“Okay.” he watched her looking around his room and followed her gaze when it landed on his Journey album.
“You ever heard of Journey?” he asked.
“Can’t say that I have.” Amanda replied. Suddenly Aaron’s cell rang and Kanden started crying.
Aaron looked at his phone and sighed “I gotta take this. Could you put him down for me?” he asked as he answered his phone. Amanda took the baby and went to Kanden’s room. On her way back she heard Aaron say “Yeah, I’ll come to the studio tomorrow and we’ll run it. … Okay. … yeah, Bye.” Aaron flipped his phone shut.
“Studio? Like a movie studio?” Amanda asked as she sat back down on the bed.
Aaron set the phone on his night stand and laid back down putting his hands behind his head. “Nah it’s a music studio.”
“Oh cool. I love music.”
Aaron raised his eyebrows and lifted his head a little so he could get a better look at her. “Really? What’s your favorite kind?”
“All kinds but mostly rock, pop, and what ever else is on the radio … as long as it’s not gangster rap or heavy metal.”
Aaron laughed a little and put his head back down but turned it so that it was facing her.
“When I get older and everything I want to be a producer or something. I want to discover someone and make their dream come true. I’ve always wanted to be in a studio. It’s where the magic happens.”
“Yeah, It is where we make the magic.” he smiled and propped himself up on his arms then thought a moment. “Hey, you wanna go with me tomorrow?”
Amanda’s wide wide eyes looked into Aaron’s chocolaty brown eyes. “Oh My God. Are you serious?”
Aaron laughed at her enthusiasm and smiled. “Yeah.” Amanda squealed excitedly and threw herself at him. The force of her momentum knocked him off balance and flat on his back. “Whoa.” Aaron laughed and returned the hug.
“Oh My God I would so love that!” she squealed still in his arms.
“I thought so.” he replied smiling. He decided to change the subject before she could ask what it was that he actually did at the studio. “So, we get to the foot ball lesson. First we’ll watch it and I’ll explain the rules to you. Then after that we’ll go out back and get you some hands on experience.”
“Hands on experience? You mean we’ll actually play?”
“Yeah.”
Amanda frowned. “But don’t you need more than two people?”
Aaron smiled. “Don’t worry about it. It’s not one-on-one it’s gonna be two-on-two. I would’ve asked Angel to play with us but she’s gonna be really busy. So I’ll call Craig and Justin.”
“okay, sounds good.”
Aaron gave her a dazzling smile. “Great!”
I have to write more no because I have absolutely nothing left.
*SNEEK PEEK*
Next time on AARON CARTER... Tackle Football.
Lol... Amanda just doesn't know it yet!:] ;) :susp: :biggrin:
tell me what you think! :)
BabyG
Apr 7th, 2006, 04:40 PM
I'm loving this!!!!! More!!!!!!!
xfunksterjunkyx
Apr 7th, 2006, 04:42 PM
Ahh. I love it! I notice that a lot of peeps describe Aar's eyes as chocolate brown..which furthers my craving.. Tackle football!?! I wanna tackle Ac, and do..oh never mind. :halo :)
CamoBratDragon
Apr 7th, 2006, 04:46 PM
cool... and yeah the baby's name is Kanden(i noticed you asked if that was his name lol).
i'll see about posting that fic i mentioned on my site when i get a beginning(i have like 7 chapter though, go figure.) lol i have a middle and i'd like to hear what people think will/should happen in the end, but yeah. beginning first. i can't post it on LD because theres swearing lol.
BabyG
Apr 7th, 2006, 05:53 PM
Ahh. I love it! I notice that a lot of peeps describe Aar's eyes as chocolate brown..which furthers my craving.. Tackle football!?! I wanna tackle Ac, and do..oh never mind. :halo :)
I would like to tackle him and then Tickle him..........oh my gosh, i just realized I was just daydreaming about that in school, earlier :D
Aar Bear's girl
Apr 7th, 2006, 06:04 PM
Ahh. I love it! I notice that a lot of peeps describe Aar's eyes as chocolate brown..which furthers my craving.. Tackle football!?! I wanna tackle Ac, and do..oh never mind. :halo :)
LoL:funny: Exactly my thoughts!;) I'm writing the next chapter right now!:biggrin: so in the meantime (sp?) tell me what you think will happen out on the field! :wink: :devil: :angel: :)
xfunksterjunkyx
Apr 7th, 2006, 06:05 PM
I think Amanda will tackle him to the floor and they start..getting busy..LOL, just kidding. Maybe they'd start kissing or something.
Unless Jmac comes along and tries to steal Amanda away from AC, provoking a fight and ohhh nevermind. lol
BabyG
Apr 7th, 2006, 06:12 PM
Sar, you took the words right out of my mouth!!!
Aar Bear's girl
Apr 7th, 2006, 06:15 PM
you both are very close
BabyG
Apr 7th, 2006, 06:18 PM
^seriously??
SapphireTears
Apr 7th, 2006, 07:58 PM
I think that Aaron will tackle Amanda.Than JMac will come and whisp amanda away, making aaron a jealous wreck. haha. (I got nothing against ac I just like romantic angst and drama :p)
BabyG
Apr 7th, 2006, 08:20 PM
I just can't wait to see what happens next. Let's see who's right!
Aar Bear's girl
Apr 9th, 2006, 03:00 PM
okay I'm back I still have to write more after this chapter though
Amanda got comfortable and let the learning begin.
Once the game ended Aaron Called his friends Craig and Justin. After he hung up he look at Amanda who was frowning at the playbacks. “What’s up?” he asked as he sat down next to her.
“They are so gonna kill each other.” Aaron laughed and sat back to watch the rest of the playbacks.
Ten minutes later, the doorbell rang.
“That’s them. Let’s go.” Aaron said as they headed downstairs.
“Hey man,” Craig, said tossing the football to Aaron as he opened the door.
“Hey.” Aaron said as he let them in.
“Dude do you take that girl everywhere with you?” Justin said as he noticed Amanda behind Aaron.
“‘That girl’ has a name and there’s this thing called tact. Use it.” Amanda said as she stepped out from behind Aaron.
“Guys, this is Amanda. This is Craig and Justin.” Craig and Justin nodded in greeting.
OUTSIDE
“Okay so let’s split up we’re gonna play tackle football-”
“Tackle? Like they did on TV?” Amanda interrupted Aaron.
Aaron smiled. “Yeah like on TV.” he saw the terrified look on her face and said “Don’t worry, I’ll put you on Craig’s team.”
Amanda still frantic, said “What’s good about that?”
Aaron smirked and leaned in till his mouth almost touched her ear and said in a low voice so the others wouldn’t hear “Because Justin can’t tackle worth sh*t!” but they heard anyway which was Aaron’s real intent.
Craig snickered while Justin frowned and said “HEY!” then everyone but Justin cracked up. He was still confused.
Aaron and Justin were on one team and Amanda and Craig were on the other.
(A/N: I don’t know much about football either so I’m just making up!)
Aaron was in the middle of calling out a bunch of random numbers when Amanda interrupted with a frown.
“So you just call out a bunch of random numbers?”
Aaron smiled and shook his head no. “Yeah that’s it.” He then threw the ball to Justin who was busy checking Amanda out and was immediately tackled by Craig.
“Dude, pay attention!” Aaron said to Justin as Craig tossed the ball to Amanda.
She got this frantic and scared look in her eyes. “What do I do?” she asked Craig in a scared voice.
“You run!” he replied as he saw both Aaron and Justin begin to chase her. He only managed to tackle Justin since he was closer to him, but Aaron got away and ran straight towards Amanda and she screamed.
Aaron tackled her but twisted his body so that she landed on him. It was so she wouldn’t get hurt he thought.
yeah right! i think someone just entered the land of denial! lol
tell me what you think or what you think will happen next! :)
BabyG
Apr 9th, 2006, 03:09 PM
Freakin A!!!! I think someone's gonna get jealous...
Aar Bear's girl
Apr 9th, 2006, 03:19 PM
me too. I'll give ya little hint as to what happens in school tomorrow: Jessie is not as nice as he looks, Amanda just doesn't realize it
BabyG
Apr 9th, 2006, 04:28 PM
k! Ohh i can't wait!
xfunksterjunkyx
Apr 9th, 2006, 08:57 PM
Uh oh. Um. Yeah. More. Like now. :)
Aar Bear's girl
Apr 9th, 2006, 10:02 PM
Hey, I know you all are looking forward to another chapter like right now, and I appreciate the enthusiasm, but I might not be able to post for a couple of days because I'm moving in like two weeks and I have a lot of packing to do so I'll be on as often as I can. sorry for the inconvenience.
SapphireTears
Apr 10th, 2006, 02:30 PM
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!! :D haha
Aar Bear's girl
Apr 11th, 2006, 04:38 PM
Hey, I'm back. Still packing though :)
NEXT DAY
Angel ran across the street and knocked the door. Amanda came out and they walked to Aaron’s car talking along the way. Aaron found himself listening very closely to what the girls were saying and he had no idea why.
“So what happened yesterday while I was gone?” Angel asked Amanda.
“I came over and Aaron was so sweet. He taught me a lot about football and then we actually played it.” Amanda replied.
“You played football?” Angel raised an eyebrow.
“Yeah. Oh and Aaron invited me to go to the music studio that he works at.”
“He did, did he?” Angel gave Aaron a warning glare.
“Yeah.” Amanda was totally oblivious to the tension between the brother and sister.
At School
Amanda had a free period right before lunch and was using it to look around the school. She looked very cute in her lime green tank top and denim skirt. She walked around and found herself in front of the library. She went in and when she came out her nose was stuck in a book about sharks. She was fascinated by all things that were animals or lived in the water. Her friends back home thought it was strange that she loved to learn about marine life and things that lived in the water, yet she wouldn’t eat anything that lived in it. She absolutely hated seafood. She wouldn’t eat it for anything.
She was in the middle of reading about this prehistoric shark when she ran into someone.
Jesse was walking down the hall thinking about …whatever it is that guys think about, when he ran into someone. He grabbed her by the arms to steady themselves.
“Sorry.” they both said at the same time. Amanda laughed nervously. This was the guy she had been crushing on ever since…yesterday and he was actually talking to her.
“Are you new? I don’t think I’ve seen you around here before.” Jesse said.
“Uh, yeah. I just started yesterday. I’m Amanda.” she said as she held out her hand.
“Jesse.” he replied as he took it. “So, are you a freshman?”
“No, I’m a sophomore.”
“Awesome.” Jesse said as the bell rang. “well hey, I guess I’ll see you around.”
“Yeah.” Amanda said as she watched Jesse walk away. She sighed. This was going to be perfect.
At lunch Amanda was looking for Angel when she felt someone tap her on her shoulder. She turned around and saw that it was Jesse.
“Hey.” he said
“Hey.” she smiled
“You wanna come sit with us?” he asked as he gestured towards the rest of the football team.
“Sure.” she replied.
A few tables away, Angel watched as Amanda sat down next to Jesse. She was happy for her friend, really, she was. It was just that she wanted Aaron and Amanda to be friends and if Amanda was with Jesse, then that would cause problems. She discovered that she liked she liked hanging out with her brother and her best friend at the same time. And in other circumstances, hanging out with Aaron, Amanda, and her boyfriend would be just fine. Fun even. But if her boyfriend is Jesse McCartney then hanging out with them and Aaron at the same time would be hard… make that almost impossible.
“Hey Angel, What’s up?” Craig asked as he and Justin sat down. It was a good thing Aaron had to be somewhere right now or…. She didn’t even want to go there.
“Oh hey, nothing’s up. You?”
“Nope. Oh well I think that Justin was ‘crushing’ on that Amanda girl yesterday.”
“If by ‘crushing’ you mean having dirty thoughts?” She clarified.
“Yeah, basically. I was just putting it in a nice way.” Craig said
“Dude, Aaron’s so gonna flip when he sees this.” Justin said.
“What?” Craig looked at him.
“His girlfriend is sitting and talking with Jesse.”
“Justin, Amanda isn’t Aaron’s girlfriend.” Angel told him.
“Really? Because the way he was acting yesterday, I thought she was.”
Angel frowned. “How was he acting?”
“He was so putting the moves on her.” Craig said.
“Kinda like Jesse is now.” Justin added. They all looked over to where Amanda and Jesse were sitting. Jesse was flirting with her.
“So, you seriously like football?” he asked.
“Well, it’s a little rough, but yeah, it’s fun.”
“Are you doing anything tonight?” he was thinking that they could get to know each other better.
“Yeah my friend’s brother is taking me to this music studio to see what he does, because I’m interested in becoming a producer or something like that. But how about tomorrow night?”
“Yeah, that sounds great.” he said as the bell rang. “I’ll pick you up around seven?
“Sure. See you then.” Amanda said as she turned and walked away.
Tell me what you think will happen! :)
xfunksterjunkyx
Apr 11th, 2006, 05:01 PM
“Well, it’s a little rough, but yeah, it’s fun.”
“Are you doing anything tonight?” he was thinking that they could get to know each other better.
*giggle*
SapphireTears
Apr 11th, 2006, 06:31 PM
I think that Amanda and Aaron are gonna' go on their date and have a good time, then Jesse and Amanda will be on their date and Aaron sees them
SapphireTears
Apr 11th, 2006, 06:32 PM
P.S. *pounds on the desk yelling* MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!
BabyG
Apr 11th, 2006, 06:40 PM
i love iiiiiitt!!!! you know i never get tired of saying that...GIVE ME MORE!!!!!!!!!!
Aar Bear's girl
Apr 11th, 2006, 08:28 PM
Ok question: do you know what kind of car Aaron drives? If you don't I'll just use the red one from POPSTAR. what kind of car is that?
Speaking of cars, I'm getting one soon! Yay for me!
Ok now it's my turn to be demanding and beg. (see below) :)
SapphireTears: You need to update Where The Heart is. It's one of my favorites!
BabyG: you need to update What Lies Beyond and Get Over It. (I love get over it already)
alexlovesaaron5: Please update Do You Remember.
xfunksterjunkyx: It would really mean a lot if you would think about picking Checked Off up.
CamoBratDragon: please update Untitled 1
xfunksterjunkyx
Apr 12th, 2006, 05:01 PM
Whoa. I like love you now. I didn't realize anyone besides a couple of my 'netgirls read my fics. *hugs*
BabyG
Apr 12th, 2006, 05:12 PM
Ok question: do you know what kind of car Aaron drives? If you don't I'll just use the red one from POPSTAR. what kind of car is that?
Speaking of cars, I'm getting one soon! Yay for me!
Ok now it's my turn to be demanding and beg. (see below) :)
SapphireTears: You need to update Where The Heart is. It's one of my favorites!
BabyG: you need to update What Lies Beyond and Get Over It. (I love get over it already)
alexlovesaaron5: Please update Do You Remember.
xfunksterjunkyx: It would really mean a lot if you would think about picking Checked Off up.
CamoBratDragon: please update Untitled 1
oky doky when i saw AC on 20/20 he was driving a red pickup. I hope that helped.
haha. I do need to update What lies Beyond don't I. Oky doky. Get over it is all written and finished but i'm just to lazy to put it up. Don't worry i'll put if up. I'm thinking about putting a couple of chapters up later on today. So keep a look out.
Thanks for reading my stories!!! :kiss: Have you read any others?
Sarah26767
Apr 12th, 2006, 06:26 PM
i'm enjoying this story so far! and i'll check out everyone elses stories also later.. i enjoy reading them, the problem is i have no time to read them anymore:(
SapphireTears
Apr 12th, 2006, 08:06 PM
I updated 'Where the Heart Is.' lol It only took me four months.. :rolleyes:
CamoBratDragon
Apr 13th, 2006, 01:29 PM
lol i'm surprised you read my fics! i didn't think anyone did! i'll see what i can get to in that one, i know a few things i wanna see happen, but i need to revise what i have so far. plus i'm not on my computer right now. i'm not even at home! i'll update the second i get the chance.
Aar Bear's girl
Apr 14th, 2006, 09:49 AM
Thanks everyone! I will also update as soon as I am moved. ( hopfully a little before that :) ) because I will be packing until the day before we move because I am a Pack rat ... Make tha a Proud Pack rat. Yes I can never get rid of anything because it has too many memories! lol
P.S. What does the little star next to the online button mean?
SapphireTears
Apr 14th, 2006, 04:59 PM
Thanks everyone! I will also update as soon as I am moved. ( hopfully a little before that :) ) because I will be packing until the day before we move because I am a Pack rat ... Make tha a Proud Pack rat. Yes I can never get rid of anything because it has too many memories! lol
P.S. What does the little star next to the online button mean?
the star is to give someone Reputation. The little green bars that you see show you how much a person has. You start with one bar and the more 'reps' people give you the more bars you get.
BabyG
Apr 14th, 2006, 05:28 PM
I was wondering what those meant.
Sarah26767
Apr 14th, 2006, 08:04 PM
ya.. I was too.. just never wanted to ask. I only have one:(
BabyG
Apr 14th, 2006, 08:53 PM
yah me too.
Aar Bear's girl
Apr 18th, 2006, 08:25 PM
Hey Guy, sorry about the no update but I'm still writing it!!! Grr!
So what is the whole thing with reputation pts and how do you get them?
brookehoganfan
Apr 18th, 2006, 09:24 PM
OMG! I love it.. it's amazing, good job, can't wait to read the rest.
CamoBratDragon
Apr 22nd, 2006, 10:23 AM
*bump* lol i didn't want it to fall to the second page. and i was reading it over, and i can't wait to see what happens.
Aar Bear's girl
Apr 22nd, 2006, 05:46 PM
Amanda walked towards Angel, Craig, and Justin.
“Oh My God, He totally just asked me out.” she told Angel.
“That’s great.” Angel replied enthusiastically though inside she was torn. If Aaron found out about this then he would be crushed. Or worse… he would be majorly jealous. And a jealous Aaron, sometimes lead to an impulsive Aaron. And an impulsive Aaron was not always good.
Right after school, Aaron drove up in his red Porsche and Amanda got in the car. As they drove away from the school Aaron glanced at Amanda.
“So, are you ready to see the studio?” Amanda looked at him and smiled.
“Definitely!” she said excitedly.
Aaron smiled back. “Great.” Inside he was thinking that it might be time to let her know who he really was. He shook it off. He didn’t want her to like him just because he was a pop star.
When Amanda and Aaron arrived at the studio, Aaron got nervous. He didn’t want to slip and accidentally reveal who he was. He was starting to think that bringing her to the studio was not such a good idea after all. She was bound to find out.
As they entered, Aaron lead her to the recording room. Amanda got to sit behind the window and watch Aaron record. He sang some songs and then he came out and showed her what a producer did and show her around the building.
“This is so amazing.” Amanda said as she looked around. Aaron who was standing next to her, just smiled and watched her.
He noticed that she was a very curious girl. She was fascinated by the simplest things. He thought it was actually kinda cute.
Amanda turned around and looked at Aaron. “You know, you are a pretty good singer. Amazing even.”
Aaron smiled nervously. “Thanks.”
Suddenly, Amanda cell phone rang. “Hold on.” Amanda told Aaron. “Hello?…Oh, hi Ang…”
Aaron could hear the person on the other end talk.
Angel: Do you want to go out tonight?
Amanda: Sure. What should I wear
Angel: Something sexy.
Aaron raised his eyebrows, caught Amanda’s gaze and smirked.
Amanda blushed at Aaron’s reaction and tore her eyes away from his. Aaron found her shyness amusing.
“Angel!” Amanda said embarrassed.
Angel: What?
Amanda: I’m not alone right now.
Angel: Oh Aaron heard that did he?
Amanda heard Angel snicker over the phone and glanced back at Aaron to see him smirk again.
Amanda: yes he did.
Angel: Oh. Well do you want to spend the night tonight?
Aaron frowned. Spend the night? tonight? Nick was coming home tonight. And he was bringing the guys! This was not good. Angel may be ready to Amanda about the family but he wasn’t. He was starting to like this girl and he wanted to know that she wouldn’t use him for his fame.
Amanda: Sure!
Angel: Great! See you later then.
Amanda: Bye!
Amanda flipped her phone shut and looked at Aaron. “So what now?”
Aaron turned to look at her. “I don’t know. What do you wanna do?” Aaron thought he should keep her away from the house for as long as possible.
tell me what you think.
Sorry to say this but it will be a little while till I update because of some things at home. :(
I love you all and I will try to update when things get sorted out.
BabyG
Apr 22nd, 2006, 06:42 PM
oh my gosh this is soooo awesome!!!!!
What happened are you okay?
SapphireTears
Apr 22nd, 2006, 07:13 PM
I love it!! Post more soon!!!
Ocean_Serenity
Apr 22nd, 2006, 08:15 PM
Aww what happened? awesome story I wanyt more
xfunksterjunkyx
Apr 22nd, 2006, 10:06 PM
more.
like yeah.
I want to see Aaron call him mommy and sort things out.
BabyG
Apr 26th, 2006, 07:06 PM
hahahahha
OcBaybee
May 2nd, 2006, 02:02 PM
Hey. Wow. I haven't been on ld in like a week. Or when I have come on here I didn't read threads like this.
But I must say it took me forever cuz I'm on the sidekick, BUT I love this story so far. Its amazing. I hope to read more soon!
BabyG
May 13th, 2006, 09:04 AM
I wanty some morey. pleasy?
CamoBratDragon
May 13th, 2006, 01:45 PM
lol i almost forgot about this one! its a really good one, though.
jenn
May 13th, 2006, 03:51 PM
poor Aaron :(
I need more!! please update sooooon:biggrin: :biggrin:
Ceccy
May 19th, 2006, 03:58 PM
Awww!!! i whant to read more :p it's sooo exiting!!!!! i hope Amanda and Aaron will be together.. :)
But how are you? =)
Aar Bear's girl
Jul 4th, 2006, 02:05 PM
Hi guys, I know it has been forever since I updated and I am so sorry. My brother came home from boot camp (he's going into the Army) and I wanted to spend some time with him... Some just happend to be alot.
And thank you so much for caring about my okay...ness. lol I am doing fine and i will update now
Aar Bear's girl
Jul 4th, 2006, 02:06 PM
Aaron did the only thing he knew would buy him a couple of hours. He took her to the movies. She was reluctant at first but he said she could pick any movie she wanted. She finally gave in and picked a movie but said that she had to be in time to get her things. He agreed but was scared on the inside.
“Hey Aaron?”
“Yeah?” he asked turning his head.
“You’re a guy right?” she asked keeping her eyes on the screen.
“Yeah,” he said frowning at her at the same time as a scary scene came on. She jumped and grabbed his hand squeezing it tight.
“Do you get a kick out of taking girls to scary movies?!” Aaron smirked looking her up and down.
“You’re the one who picked the movie. Are you telling me you’re scared?”
Amanda ignored the last part of his comment and said, “Well I didn’t know it would be scary. And you’re supposed to talk me out of these things.” Aaron raised an eyebrow.
“And let you drag me to a chick flick …or worse… A sappy romance? I don’t think so.”
Amanda glanced at him. “Oh, so you enjoy scaring girls?!”
Aaron smiled at her. “Well if it gets you this worked up then yeah.” He snickered. Amanda smacked his shoulder.
Aaron wrapped his arm around her. “Don’t worry, I’ll protect you.” Amanda glanced at him to see if he was serious and saw him trying to hold back a laugh.
“Yeah right.” She said and tried to squirm out of his grasp. Aaron held on tight and smirked when she finally gave up and slumped against him. “Fine you win.”
Just after she said that another scary scene came on and she buried her head in his shoulder.
Aaron smirked again and held her closer as he leaned his head down to her ear and whispered, “I always win.” Aaron decided that he liked the feel of her close to him. Sure he had a past with girls especially since he was a pop star. And because of that title, they never ended well. He thought it would be different this time with this girl, but he had to make sure no one could tell her who he was before he could. Well that wasn’t it. He could tell her right now if he wanted. The problem was the more he liked this girl, the more he knew he had to tell her and the more he was afraid to lose her because he told her. It wasn’t because of her anymore. He wasn’t afraid that she would use him. He was afraid that she would hate him for lying to her and never want to see him again.
Amanda looked up at him and noticed that he was frowning. “Hey what’s wrong?” Aaron jumped and Amanda giggled, “Who’s scared now?” Aaron looked down at her as she laughed and smiled.
After the movie ended he droved her home. “Hey Aaron, what time is it?”
Aaron checked his watch. “Like 5:00.”
“Great. That gives me an hour to pack.” Aaron looked at her incredulously and she laughed. “I’m kidding.”
Aaron instantly relaxed and said, “I knew that. I was just playing along.”
She looked at him and said, “Sure.”
SapphireTears
Jul 4th, 2006, 06:10 PM
two words... MORE NOW!!!
P.S. Glad to hear everything's okay :)
jenn
Jul 5th, 2006, 01:34 AM
I have three words for ya: I NEED MORE
Aar Bear's girl
Jul 5th, 2006, 12:11 PM
Thanks for the positive comments. I now have writers block but hopefully it wont last. I hate to say this but that was the last chapter I had written. Not the last chapter in the story (because the story isn't over yet) just the last one I wrote. So I am going to write 3 or 4 more chapters before I update that way when I do update I can do it regularly (so you can have chapter after chapter coming at you) :) I will update as soon as that is done but it would probably go faster if you could give me some ideas. :)
SapphireTears
Jul 7th, 2006, 08:29 AM
you should have amanda and jesse on a date, and aaron sees them
jenn
Jul 7th, 2006, 08:33 AM
and maybe it's time for amanda to find out who Aaron realy is?
SapphireTears
Jul 7th, 2006, 08:42 AM
and maybe it's time for amanda to find out who Aaron realy is?
yeah that too :D but she should see it on like a poster or something
jenn
Jul 7th, 2006, 08:52 AM
yeah that would be funny!
like"what tha ****"
SapphireTears
Jul 7th, 2006, 09:01 AM
lol :D It should be an advertisement for one of his shows, like in the window of a venue or something
jenn
Jul 7th, 2006, 10:04 AM
or in a gossip magazin or something that she reads :devil:
SapphireTears
Jul 7th, 2006, 10:13 AM
yeah :susp:
jenn
Jul 7th, 2006, 11:29 AM
or someone at her school tells her
BabyG
Jul 8th, 2006, 12:47 PM
awesome awesome!!!
jenn
Jul 10th, 2006, 05:50 AM
I can't wait much longer!:eek:
xfunksterjunkyx
Jul 10th, 2006, 11:38 AM
yeahh. thanks for the update, girl!
Maybe she should hear a celebrity ex girlfriend call him..and then find out from there..lol
jenn
Jul 10th, 2006, 11:44 AM
OoO yeah!
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